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simayet:
REFLECTION TASK 2a
Media has an enormous e...: REFLECTION TASK 2a Media has an enormous effect on people’s perception of beauty. First of all, it leads to the emergence of a...
Dear Simayet
I can say that that is a great writing in terms of your use of language and fluency of the paragraph. When I read the lines, I started to think that the all the facts you've mentioned are totally true. In fact I can even say that sometimes I feel the media's effect on me when it comes to the beauty, fashion and the cosmetics which are shown to people via media. I mean, from time to time I start to check my appearance by comparing mine to the women on TV's, in magazines or on the internet. Therefore, you chose a really great topic to write about. However, I wish you would share your opinions much more on this topic. I mean, what do you really think? Is the effect of media on people that great or true? Isn't there any idea that you disagree with? All in all, I love your writing :)
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